My Actifit Report Card: August 28 2019

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Had a very boring day and this affected my mood so in making the day fulfilled in happiness, I decided to listen to music,sing and also dance..... And the good news is,i was so refreshed after the little workout on dancing..... Amazing technique of actifit

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Dancing
Height
185 cm
Weight
82 kg
Body Fat
55 %
Waist
32 cm
Thighs
25 cm
Chest
10 cm

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Hi @kayda-ventures - I do not normally comment or vote on Actifit stuff but I wanted to offer you a little advice which will make your writing look more legit.

The dots you used in this post, after the words dance and dancing...

They are called an ellipsis, a punctuation mark. There should only be three dots though, no more, no less.

They are used if and author is omitting a word or phrase, line, paragraph, or more from a quoted passage. It can also be used to suggest there is more coming...

...Such as I just used it now.

Anyway, I hope you don't mind me saying this. Using more or less than three dots is common, but not right and those that use it correctly will seem like a more accomplished writer.

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Oh! Thank you so much.
I really appreciate.
You always inspire me honestly and I also love the way you correct me of my mistakes. Thanks so much. I will work on it. ☺

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