RE: [Esp] Con Orgullo; Historia Olímpica Venezolana [Eng] With pride; Venezuelan Olympic History

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An interesting post but unfortunately except for 2 paragraphs is all sourced and for that reason cannot put this through for extra curation. In order to qualify we need more of your own words.



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Thank you, could you tell me where is the detail please

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Your first paragraph is fine but after that everything has [source] after it. There is one more paragraph that is your own and not enough of your own writing. Having one or two is fine, but not the other way around. I am going to ask @mvll2304 to please explain to you where it needs to change as he is a Spanish speaker.

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ok thanks, I'll be waiting for your suggestion to correct

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Thanks for your suggestion brother, corrected publication, and what leads source out of respect for copyright logically remain

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